Monday, September 10, 2007

Article On Homestasis

Article on Homeostasis
This article talks about how humans and mammals needed to find calcium to survive. Calcium is good for your body. It helps keep bones strong and healthy. The article has very useful facts about how vitamin D helps your body regulate. You can get enough vitamin D from drinking dairy products."Calcium homeostasis helps from blood clots, maintaining blood levels, and good for muscle contraction."
My reaction to this is that people need to eat more dairy products than sodas and other soft drinks. Exercising is another way to stay healthy. To stay healthy you must do that in order to have strong bones. To many people, vitamin D harm people because it can cause ostetoclast.

2 comments:

Duval said...

This is simply a summary of the article, but it does severely boarder on plagiarism. You also needed to include a reaction to the article that includes your thought about the article. You will need to redo this assignment. The summary needs to be more in your own words and you need to include a reaction.

Duval said...

THis is a good improvement. You still need to have two separate paragraphs for your assignment. The first paragraph should be a summary of the article and the second should be your reaction to the article.